diff --git a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/FlameCamera.tsx b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/FlameCamera.tsx
index 8c40fe7..b14d29e 100644
--- a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/FlameCamera.tsx
+++ b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/FlameCamera.tsx
@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ export default function FlameCamera({ children }: Props) {
 
   const [zoom, setZoom] = React.useState(0);
   const [rotate, setRotate] = React.useState(0);
-  const [offsetX, setOffsetX] = React.useState(0);
-  const [offsetY, setOffsetY] = React.useState(0);
+  const [positionX, setPositionX] = React.useState(0);
+  const [positionY, setPositionY] = React.useState(0);
 
   const resetCamera = () => {
     setZoom(0);
     setRotate(0);
-    setOffsetX(0);
-    setOffsetY(0);
+    setPositionX(0);
+    setPositionY(0);
   }
   const resetButton = <button className={styles.inputReset} onClick={resetCamera}>Reset</button>;
 
@@ -42,12 +42,12 @@ export default function FlameCamera({ children }: Props) {
       finalColor: { color: params.xformFinalColor, colorSpeed: 0.5 },
       scale,
       zoom,
-      rotate: rotate / 180 * Math.PI,
-      offsetX,
-      offsetY
+      rotate: -rotate / 180 * Math.PI,
+      positionX,
+      positionY
     };
     setPainter(chaosGameCamera(gameParams));
-  }, [scale, zoom, rotate, offsetX, offsetY]);
+  }, [scale, zoom, rotate, positionX, positionY]);
 
   return (
       <>
@@ -64,14 +64,14 @@ export default function FlameCamera({ children }: Props) {
                    onInput={e => setRotate(Number(e.currentTarget.value))}/>
           </div>
           <div className={styles.inputElement}>
-            <p>Offset X: {offsetX}</p>
-            <input type={"range"} min={-2} max={2} step={0.01} value={offsetX}
-                   onInput={e => setOffsetX(Number(e.currentTarget.value))}/>
+            <p>Offset X: {positionX}</p>
+            <input type={"range"} min={-2} max={2} step={0.01} value={positionX}
+                   onInput={e => setPositionX(Number(e.currentTarget.value))}/>
           </div>
           <div className={styles.inputElement}>
-            <p>Offset Y: {offsetY}</p>
-            <input type={"range"} min={-2} max={2} step={0.01} value={offsetY}
-                   onInput={e => setOffsetY(Number(e.currentTarget.value))}/>
+            <p>Offset Y: {positionY}</p>
+            <input type={"range"} min={-2} max={2} step={0.01} value={positionY}
+                   onInput={e => setPositionY(Number(e.currentTarget.value))}/>
           </div>
         </div>
         {children}
diff --git a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/camera.ts b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/camera.ts
index 2a2435d..b6b8ef9 100644
--- a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/camera.ts
+++ b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/camera.ts
@@ -3,19 +3,17 @@ export function camera(
     y: number,
     width: number,
     height: number,
-    scale: number,
-    zoom: number,
+    positionX: number,
+    positionY: number,
     rotate: number,
-    offsetX: number,
-    offsetY: number,
+    zoom: number,
+    scale: number,
 ): [number, number] {
-    const zoomFactor = Math.pow(2, zoom);
-
-    // Zoom, offset, and rotation are
+    // Position, rotation, and zoom are
     // applied in IFS coordinates
     [x, y] = [
-        (x - offsetX) * zoomFactor,
-        (y - offsetY) * zoomFactor,
+        (x - positionX),
+        (y - positionY),
     ];
 
     [x, y] = [
@@ -23,7 +21,12 @@ export function camera(
         y * Math.sin(rotate),
         x * Math.sin(rotate) +
         y * Math.cos(rotate),
-    ]
+    ];
+
+    [x, y] = [
+      x * Math.pow(2, zoom),
+      y * Math.pow(2, zoom)
+    ];
 
     // Scale transforms IFS coordinates
     // to pixel coordinates. Shift by half
diff --git a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/chaosGameCamera.ts b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/chaosGameCamera.ts
index a94d311..37874a3 100644
--- a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/chaosGameCamera.ts
+++ b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/chaosGameCamera.ts
@@ -1,4 +1,3 @@
-// hidden-start
 import { Props as ChaosGameColorProps } from "../3-log-density/chaosGameColor";
 import { randomBiUnit } from "../src/randomBiUnit";
 import { randomChoice } from "../src/randomChoice";
@@ -10,14 +9,13 @@ import {paintColor} from "../3-log-density/paintColor";
 
 const quality = 10;
 const step = 100_000;
-// hidden-end
 
 export type Props = ChaosGameColorProps & {
-  scale: number;
-  zoom: number,
+  positionX: number;
+  positionY: number;
   rotate: number;
-  offsetX: number;
-  offsetY: number;
+  zoom: number,
+  scale: number;
 }
 
 export function* chaosGameCamera(
@@ -29,16 +27,15 @@ export function* chaosGameCamera(
     palette,
     colors,
     finalColor,
-    scale,
-    zoom,
+    positionX,
+    positionY,
     rotate,
-    offsetX,
-    offsetY,
+    zoom,
+    scale,
   }: Props
 ) {
   const pixels = width * height;
 
-  // highlight-start
   const imgRed = Array<number>(pixels)
     .fill(0);
   const imgGreen = Array<number>(pixels)
@@ -54,7 +51,7 @@ export function* chaosGameCamera(
     c: number
   ) => {
     const [pixelX, pixelY] =
-      camera(x, y, width, height, scale, zoom, rotate, offsetX, offsetY);
+      camera(x, y, width, height, positionX, positionY, rotate, zoom, scale);
 
     if (
       pixelX < 0 ||
@@ -75,7 +72,6 @@ export function* chaosGameCamera(
     imgBlue[hIndex] += b;
     imgAlpha[hIndex] += 1;
   }
-  // highlight-end
 
   let [x, y] = [
     randomBiUnit(),
diff --git a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/index.mdx b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/index.mdx
index 78a6f5e..48f3e96 100644
--- a/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/index.mdx
+++ b/blog/2024-11-15-playing-with-fire/4-camera/index.mdx
@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ some missing features.
 To review, the restrictions we've had so far:
 
 > ...we need to convert from fractal flame coordinates to pixel coordinates.
-> To simplify things, we'll assume that we're _plotting a square image_ with range $[0,1]$ for both x and y
+> To simplify things, we'll assume that we're plotting a square image with range $[0,1]$ for both x and y
 >
 > -- [The fractal flame algorithm](/2024/11/playing-with-fire)
 
@@ -37,20 +37,82 @@ Second, the assumption that fractals use the range $[0, 1]$. My statement above
 for Sierpinski's Gasket, the solution set is indeed defined on $[0, 1]$, but all other images in the series
 use a display range of $[-2, 2]$.
 
-Finally, the camera controls available in Apophysis/[`flam3`](https://github.com/scottdraves/flam3/wiki/XML-File-Format)
-have a number of settings that were simply not implemented so far:
+## Parameters
+
+For comparison, here are the camera controls available in Apophysis and [`flam3`](https://github.com/scottdraves/flam3/wiki/XML-File-Format):
 
 <center>![Screenshot of Apophysis camera controls](./camera-controls.png)</center>
 
-The parameters remaining to implement are scale, zoom, rotation, and position.
+There are four parameters yet to implement: position, rotation, zoom, and scale.
 
-## Scale
+### Position
 
-Fractal flames are defined on a continuous range. At some point, we must convert from fractal flame coordinates
-into specific pixels, and scale is the parameter we use to do it. Specifically, scale is **the number of pixels
-in one unit of the fractal flame coordinate system**.
+Fractal flames normally use the origin as the center of an image. The position parameters (X and Y) move
+the center point, which effectively pans the image. A positive X position shifts the image left,
+and a negative X position shifts the image right. Similarly, a positive Y position shifts the image up,
+and a negative Y position shifts the image down.
 
-For example, if you open the [reference parameters](../params.flame) in a text editor, you'll see the following:
+To apply the position, simply subtract the X and Y position from each point in the chaos game prior to plotting it:
+
+```typescript
+[x, y] = [
+  x - positionX,
+  y - positionY
+];
+```
+
+### Rotation
+
+After the position parameters are applied, we can rotate the image around the (potentially shifted) center point.
+To do so, we'll go back to the [affine transformations](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Affine_transformation)
+we've been using. Specifically, the rotation angle $\theta$ gives us a transform matrix we can apply to our point:
+
+$$
+\begin{bmatrix}
+\text{cos}(\theta) & -\text{sin}(\theta) \\
+\text{sin}(\theta) & \text{cos}(\theta)
+\end{bmatrix}
+
+\begin{bmatrix}
+x \\
+y
+\end{bmatrix}
+$$
+
+As a minor tweak, we also negate the rotation angle to match the behavior of Apophysis/`flam3`.
+
+```typescript
+[x, y] = [
+  x * Math.cos(-rotate) -
+  y * Math.sin(-rotate),
+  x * Math.sin(-rotate) +
+  y * Math.cos(-rotate),
+];
+```
+
+### Zoom
+
+This parameter does what the name implies; zoom in and out of the image. Specifically, for a zoom parameter $z$,
+every point in the chaos game is scaled by $\text{pow}(2, z)$ prior to plotting. For example, if the point is $(1, 1)$,
+a zoom of 1 means we actually plot $(1, 1) \cdot \text{pow}(2, 1) = (2, 2)$.
+
+```
+[x, y] = [
+  x * Math.pow(2, zoom),
+  y * Math.pow(2, zoom)
+];
+```
+
+:::info
+In addition to scaling the image, renderers also [scale the image quality](https://github.com/scottdraves/flam3/blob/f8b6c782012e4d922ef2cc2f0c2686b612c32504/rect.c#L796-L797)
+to compensate for the zoom parameter.
+:::
+
+### Scale
+
+Finally, we need to convert from fractal flame coordinates to individual pixels. The scale parameter defines
+how many pixels are in one unit of the fractal flame coordinate system. For example, if you open the
+[reference parameters](../params.flame) in a text editor, you'll see the following:
 
 ```xml
 <flame name="final xform" size="600 600" center="0 0" scale="150">
@@ -61,29 +123,57 @@ with 150 pixels per unit. Dividing 600 by 150 gives us an image that is 4 units
 And because the center is at $(0, 0)$, the final image is effectively looking at the range $[-2, 2]$ in the
 fractal coordinate system (as mentioned above).
 
+To go from the fractal coordinate system to a pixel coordinate system, we multiply by the scale,
+then subtract half the image width and height:
+
+```typescript
+[pixelX, pixelY] = [
+  x * scale - imageWidth / 2,
+  y * scale - imageHeight / 2
+]
+```
+
 Scale can be used to implement a kind of "zoom" in images. If the reference parameters instead used `scale="300"`,
 the same 600 pixels would instead be looking at the range $[-1, 1]$ in the fractal coordinate system.
 
-This also demonstrates the biggest problem with using scale: it's a parameter that only controls the output image.
-If the output image changed to `size="1200 1200"`, and scale stayed the same, the output image would have
-a lot more white space. Instead, it's usually better to use a different parameter for controlling image size.
+However, this also demonstrates the biggest problem with using scale: it's a parameter that only controls the output image.
+If the output image changed to `size="1200 1200"` and we kept `scale="150"`, the output image would
+be looking at the range $[-4, 4]$ - nothing but white space. Because, using the zoom parameter
+is the preferred way to zoom in and out of an image.
 
-## Zoom
+:::info
+One final note about the camera controls: every step in this process (position, rotation, zoom, scale)
+is an affine transformation. And because affine transformations can be chained together, it's possible to
+express all of our camera controls as a single transformation matrix. This is important for software optimization;
+rather than applying individual camera controls step-by-step, apply all of them at once.
 
+Additionally, because the camera controls are an affine transformation, they could be implemented
+as a transform after the final transform. In practice though, it's helpful to control them separately.
+:::
 
-## Rotation
-
-## Offset
-
+## Camera
 
+With the individual steps defined, we can put together a more robust "camera" for viewing the fractal flame.
 
 import CodeBlock from "@theme/CodeBlock";
-
 import cameraSource from "!!raw-loader!./camera"
 
 <CodeBlock language="typescript">{cameraSource}</CodeBlock>
 
+For demonstration, the output image has a 4:3 aspect ratio, removing the previous restriction of a square image.
+In addition, the scale is automatically chosen to make sure the width of the image covers the range $[-2, 2]$.
+As a result of the aspect ratio, the image height effectively covers the range $[-1.5, 1.5]$.
+
 import {SquareCanvas} from "../src/Canvas";
 import FlameCamera from "./FlameCamera";
 
 <SquareCanvas name={"flame_camera"} width={'95%'} aspectRatio={'4/3'}><FlameCamera /></SquareCanvas>
+
+## Summary
+
+The fractal images so far relied on critical assumptions about the output format to make sure everything
+looked correct. However, we can implement a 2D "camera" with a series of affine transformations - going from
+the fractal flame coordinate system to pixel coordinates. Later implementations of fractal flame renderers like
+[Fractorium](http://fractorium.com/) operate in 3D, and have to implement the camera slightly differently.
+
+But for this blog series, it's nice to achieve feature parity with the existing code.
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